@a_s_raisa I checked out yours, and I enjoyed every poem! I think "Veiled Piece" was my favorite. It seemed to have the most rhythm. As you could probably tell by my poetry, I prefer rhyming poems, but it doesn't have to rhyme to have rhythm. I think a big piece of advice I would have is to break your poetry more into stanzas. If you write in a different area of your device and paste it here, it gets rid of stanzas, making the writing look at bit sloppy, and hard to read. This does not mean it is bad, some people like that form of poetry, I just think that poetry is easier to read when it has clear sections. I also ran into a bit of confusion when it came to punctuation in the earlier chapters. The hyphens at the end of some lines made it seem more broken up than it should have been, but I think this changed over the course of a couple of chapters. Overall, I really loved your wording. I love the metaphors used throughout your poems. You are truly a talented writer.
