Those of you who have read my book. It was kinda bland well I've edited the first four chapters. There's more imagery and it explains more of the military weaponry. Go ahead and reread the first few chapters and tell me what I can make better.
How are you guys liking the book so far. Its not close to being done. May not be able to post any tomorrow because I'm chauffeuring my mother around tomorrow. Let me know if there are any spelling errors or grammar errors in the book.
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