Codenamefinn

Hi Codenamefinn,
          I rather enjoyed reading your stories, specifically Path Not Taken. The details about setting really helped the tone and atmosphere.  I was wondering if you'd be willing to take a look at my story, a first attempt at writing about love. If you have some time, I much appreciate if you could advise on what might need improving? 
          It's called A Shattered Glass, My Life Without Her. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/283819770-a-shattered-glass-my-life-without-her
          Thank you