annie28stevens
Hi just a suggestion I'm not trying to hate or anything, I've noticed in your stories how the grammar doesn't really match up and it looks really awkward while reading and makes the reader lose interest, your stories are amazing don't get Me wrong it's just a little more refining would make it even amazing:)))
Cold_introvert
@annie28stevens thank you for the comment and yes i know my gramma is sooo bad which is why i have not update my stories yet + i lose my plot quickly which is sooo frustrating