@loveisanamesosweet , well... hmmm... you should try to find someone who can correct the grammar work with him or her... with that, the readers would be much interested. 'coz If your story has too much grammatical errors, the tendency is that the reader would not be able to understand it and therefor wouldn't be interested to read any more of your story... They would just think that, "What's up with this story??? I can't understand it.." then they would get to another story and forget yours...
..well, that's all i have to say about it... hope it helped, even for just a bit!
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