ColinHalberstadt

hope yall have enjoyed article III, It may very well be my favorite one so far! article IV is coming along nicely, and it should give some of the first real reveals of main themes. also, to note: A dying star is a highly political book, and upcoming chapters are going to really start tapping into that. If you are struggling with the results of the 2025 election as a member of the United States and are trying to stay positive, proceed with caution, as the next few chapters will be (essentially) me venting out all of my concerns and fears towards the far-right republican party. There will be a positive ending to the whole thing, but until the story ends, stuffs gonna get bleak.

ColinHalberstadt

hope yall have enjoyed article III, It may very well be my favorite one so far! article IV is coming along nicely, and it should give some of the first real reveals of main themes. also, to note: A dying star is a highly political book, and upcoming chapters are going to really start tapping into that. If you are struggling with the results of the 2025 election as a member of the United States and are trying to stay positive, proceed with caution, as the next few chapters will be (essentially) me venting out all of my concerns and fears towards the far-right republican party. There will be a positive ending to the whole thing, but until the story ends, stuffs gonna get bleak.

ColinHalberstadt

So I did a thing.....
          Turns out, I have more ideas for article III than I thought, and I hope those who read it really enjoy. This was probably my favorite article to write by far, so I cant wait to release it!
          There is one order of buisness though.....
          I am first and foremost a highschool student, and probably wont have time to work on this until next weekend. That said, I want wait times between my articles to be as short as they can be while still maintaining quality. with that in mind, i have set article III to be released this Wednesday, February 19th! stay tuned, it is a good one....

ColinHalberstadt

Just did article 2, on a roll today lol. Its quite short and for now it probably wont be as big of a deal to readers, but as I continue to add articles and tell the story(yes, there is one, just not very clear yet) of post 21st century sentience, i will probably add on to it, as The Threshold is a key point in the series timeline and is crucial to understanding of future articles. Currently, Im planning on having 25-50 articles, but that number may shrink or grow as I continue to refine the lore of A Dying Star. As for Article III, I'm currently deciding what info I want people to learn next as, while there will only one major(but forseeable) twist, I do want people to be able to read a later article and come back to reread the first few articles and understand them better than they did before with no prior knowledge. For example, if I told you exactly what the union was, most of the questions you have would be answered quite early, and that would ruin any intruigue this story has. Point is, I beleive that article III should not be filler, but also should not be a big reveal. Also, I am pretty sure that articles I & II are in need of refining and editing so I'm going to make some revisions before I make Article III. If you see a grammatical error, let me know! I will revise the document and credit you in a pinned comment if you are correct! That said, as the series continues I might not check old article comment sections as much, so if you are correct and I havent seen your comment please dont be offended.
          TLDR: Article II will make more sense later, Im not currently writing Article III, and I am revising Articles I & II and appreciate any and all help.

ColinHalberstadt

turns out i have no idea how wattpad comments work cuz I cannot pin or edit to my knowledge, that said Im still gonna try to credit people via a linked google doc(wait is that safe? i dont really know the dangers of public gdocs so if you know anything about that pls let me know) so yea sorry im new 
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