@StoriesOfTheBold Well, I haven't gotten very far, but I'm already loving it. It's extremely well written, and though I think it started picking up speed a little too early, the names are amazing and fit the characters perfectly. It's extremely enviable, especially since naming and character design are two of the pieces of character creation I struggle most with. You don't go over board on describing the scenery, you just expect us to understand what you're trying to convey, which can be a double edged sword. In this case, you got the good edge, as it actually improves your story in this instance to my point of view. It's extremely well done, and I can't wait to read more!