KaladinNyx
Hey follow for follow, read for read, vote for vote?
Author_without
I just started Fault Line, and I really like the tension in the setup. Evie being sharp, chaotic, and hard to ignore, while Trevor seems like the kind of guy who doesn’t just notice the chaos, but actually wants to understand what’s underneath it. That kind of dynamic is so interesting because it can be playful on the surface, but still feel emotionally dangerous. In my own YA story, Lou hides behind jokes, chaos, and nervous overthinking, while JJ is someone from her past who starts noticing the little details she tries to cover up. From a writer’s perspective, do you think a love interest should calm a chaotic character down, or match her energy first before earning the right to see the softer parts?
Author_without
Thank you so much, that means a lot! I really love how you explained the difference between reckless chaos and funny/situational chaos, it actually made me think about my own character in a new way. Lou is definitely more nervous, messy, emotional chaos, so I’m really curious what you’ll think of her and JJ. I’m excited to keep reading Evie too, her energy already feels so bold and alive.
ColorMeChaos
@Author_without this is such a thoughtful comment and question. First, thank you so much for reading! Second, I'm adding your book to my list. I love chaos in all forms and would love to see another writers perspective. As for your question, I feel like the opposite character probably knows when to engage the chaos and when to calm it. And the chaotic character - what kind of chaos? For me, reckless chaos would need calm. Funny, situational chaos needs someone who can give it back or engage with it and not shy away. Every writer is different, which is why I'm now excited to read yours!