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I make covers! PM me if you want one! :)
ColorlessJay
ColorlessJay
Hey everyone! So I was kinda on a big hiatus and was super busy and had a lot going on. I am now back though and continuing on with my story Envision. I have edited through every chapter and added some stuff and I'm already working on tons of new chapters. I really pumped to be back writing and I hope to post something at least every week. I hope you read it and enjoy!! Thank you!
ChristophMaximus
Great new cover, btw!
jesuslover14
Hey Justin!! Its me again!! How are you.? I know it hasnt been that long since we last talked but honestly things can go from great to really bad in a matter of seconds so i hope you are still doing great and that soon we can talk in person.!! Hoping the best for you :)
Emily
P.S. God bless you!
ChristophMaximus
Hi, I've noticed you voted on all 8 chapters that I've posted for, 'Maximus' so far. I'm surprised and sincerely flattered that you actually read it through in one shot. Wow. Thank you, so much! I'd love to hear what you think of it so far and I'm definitely going to begin reading through Envision tonight. I'm sinceriously so grateful right now. Thank you.
- Christoph
ChristophMaximus
@Jfrench13 First, I'd just like to thank you again, so much for the feedback! I'm really happy to hear that it came across the way I wanted it to and that the characters I created were believable. I've been working on editing everything these past few days little by little getting ready to repost the entire story. So far, I have Chapter 1, 2, 3 and 4 done. So technically, I'm half way there! Once I've reworked the entire thing, I'll let you know because I would love to swap chapter reviews/critiques/edits. I'm always looking for feedback and things to improve on with my work. I think these recent edits will clear up the plot holes I've left and correct the sentences that didn't make all that much sense in your last read. I'm hoping by the beginning of next week to post up chapters 9 and 10 also. I just started reading your book just a little while ago and I'm hoping to finish a few chapters before I go to bed. Thanks again for taking the interest in my book. You rock. Cheers, - Christoph
ColorlessJay
@ChristophMaximus Ello! so what I think so far of your book is that it is just brilliant and an extremely good, well written story. I love the the whole idea of the angels and how you're blending it into the story. All of you're characters are coming out really well formed and amazing and the world you're making for them is really great because of how real it seems and how there's a supernatural effect added. I'm really enjoying everything that has been happening and how the story is. I have found a few errors in grammar and mechanics (but there's not to many) and there have been one or two points where something was worded a little weird and confusing but you seem to keep everything moving along smoothly and as clear as possible. (also if you want me to I can give you a chapter break down and what I thought about each individual chapter itself and go more in depth about what I thought, and give any critiques, suggestions or corrections)
jesuslover14
Hey Justin!! Just wanted to know how you are doing!? I hope you are having a great summer and please message soon!! haha XD I miss talking with you and Lisa in English class hehehe. Well that's all I have to say X) bye!
ColorlessJay
@jesuslover14 yup!! okay I'm a bit tired and have to finish writing my update so I'll talk to you later! bye!!
jesuslover14
Hey.!