Comet_Sans

AHHH!!! I'm kinda new to writing these stories and I have no idea if mine is any good! Can someone give me some feedback on it and maybe ways to improve it if it sucks?

Comet_Sans

*Is proud cause she feels loved*
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Mountain_tiger

No problem I was just stating a fact though!
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Comet_Sans

Aww, thanks
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Comet_Sans

AHHH!!! I'm kinda new to writing these stories and I have no idea if mine is any good! Can someone give me some feedback on it and maybe ways to improve it if it sucks?

Comet_Sans

*Is proud cause she feels loved*
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Mountain_tiger

No problem I was just stating a fact though!
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Comet_Sans

Aww, thanks
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