Tiwa Savege Comfort

not that many people make their story about supernatural things so this story coul be one of a kind https://www.wattpad.com/story/188733486

I have decided to put more action in this story to make it more  interesting .and  I might add some more romance or possibly sex

what do you guy think abut this story ? is there anything you would like me to add in chapter 3?  if there is please tell me