ComisarIlidan

A new part on "Gentlemen's Manor", I am having a blast writing this new part, but I decided to split in 2 parts since I intend to change from "short scenes", like I did in "Revelation" to more "focused scenes" (this is no technical talk, this is just how I refer to them), where the events take place in more then a day. And still, I hope you enjoy this new writing style I try to make ^^

ComisarIlidan

A new part on "Gentlemen's Manor", I am having a blast writing this new part, but I decided to split in 2 parts since I intend to change from "short scenes", like I did in "Revelation" to more "focused scenes" (this is no technical talk, this is just how I refer to them), where the events take place in more then a day. And still, I hope you enjoy this new writing style I try to make ^^

ComisarIlidan

I am sorry for being so inactive, I was at a creative block, but I am starting to get out of it. So to prove it, I have published a short new part on "Revelation" that dives more into the story of the world, I will do my best to publish the next part, that I planed to publish, next week.

jdog129

@ComisarIlidan You're welcome and thank you
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ComisarIlidan

@jdog129 Thank you for the tip and I hope you get better soon ^^
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jdog129

@ComisarIlidan No worries! I get it, I took a break myself because I went to an overnight camp for a week. Now, I have covid and I can't write as much but it helps to write a little bit. So, you won't get out of the flow and The creative block get worst
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ComisarIlidan

Stil on vacation, but I have found some time to make more corections and add a bit more text to "Revelation". I am also working on the next part of "Gentlemen's Manor" and I am considering adding a few more extra parts on "Revelation". I'd love to hear opinions on this and also what would you like me to cover in the future, if you have any ideas or preferences that I could consider.

ComisarIlidan

And so, It has ended. The final chapter of Revelation marks the completion of my first book. I hope you have enjoyed the introduction of my world. I have learned much and I intend on continuing the story. 
          
          Thank you very much for giving this small writer a chance and I hope you will keep enjoying my creations.

jdog129

@ComisarIlidan Sounds swell! I will be reading more of your book as soon as I can! Congrats on finishing your first book!
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ComisarIlidan

While taking a break from writing due to Uni life, I have decided to go again through all the parts and make more grammatical corrections. So far I have done 1/2 of all parts, soon I will finish the rest and continue writing the next part for Revelation. Until then, hope you find my next main book "Gentlemen's Manor" interesting. Toodles

ComisarIlidan

Finally, after some thinking I decided to introduce you to my new book idea. "Gentlemen's Manor"
          Right now I intend to just have this first part until I finish "Revelation". This is a world I have worked at for one or two years already. It is a great pleasure to finally be able to share it with others.
          I do hope you find this first taste to your liking and also I would like to know your opinion on "What Category would suit it best", because right now I have chosen "Random" because I have not idea which one to choose and it is require to publish the book.
          
          Please comment if you have any suggestions and again I hope you enjoy it.