CommanderTary

Captain sat at a table, the blue hadn’t faded from his left eye yet. His hand still shook from the adrenaline this body gave him. Order sipped from her squidberry banana smoothie cautiously. They always ordered their drink ahead of time. Pilot drilled her eyes into the ground. Both of them didn’t want to draw attention to Captain’s new eye. And if anyone else was smart, they wouldn’t ask either.
          	Swimmer smiled, coming to the table with his and Captain’s drink. He didn’t notice. “Cherry limeade for me, a starfruit melon for Pilot. A blueberry squidleg-grape for- Oh-” Swimmer looked at Captain’s blue eye. “Hi,” He mumbled, inching Captain’s drink closer to him. “Hi.” Captain stared at his drink. He stirred it with his straw in this limp, tired way.
          	Order was the first to speak, “You know them?”
          	Captain looked away from Order, mumbling something that might’ve been a yes? He loved avoiding honest answers, not like Captain who was more often truthful than lying.
          	“Not a fan of them. They’re childish and they don’t take things seriously. Not a fan. The random idiot with goggles especially,” Captain took a sip of his drink. Swimmer chuckled awkwardly. Things always got so tense when he was around. And it was usually Swimmer’s job to lighten the mood. Even though he sucked at it. “Is this him speaking or Captain? Cause I don’t think Captain’s ever seen Team Blue before.”

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Captain didn’t answer that one. The blue in his eye flickered painfully. He was quick to cover it, grunting. “Hhg- feels like a needle being threaded through my eye and in between the folds in my brain..”
          	  Swimmer patted Captain’s back, “I’d be saying you need to learn to control him but I have a feeling at this point there’s no point to that?” Captain sighed, twirling his blue dapple in his hand, “If it were up to me, I wouldn’t even have him in me.”
          	  Captain’s eye flickered blue, causing another bout of pain for him, “Ha! That’s a laugh. If it were up to you, you’d be a rotting corpse on top of those parking lots, idiot. Remember, Captain, I saved you.”
          	  Swimmer caught Captain’s arm before he could argue, simply shaking his head at him. Captain stood from his seat, his drink only half empty. “Is everyone done with their drinks? We gotta go train. Right now. Especially with our strategy.”
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CommanderTary

Captain sat at a table, the blue hadn’t faded from his left eye yet. His hand still shook from the adrenaline this body gave him. Order sipped from her squidberry banana smoothie cautiously. They always ordered their drink ahead of time. Pilot drilled her eyes into the ground. Both of them didn’t want to draw attention to Captain’s new eye. And if anyone else was smart, they wouldn’t ask either.
          Swimmer smiled, coming to the table with his and Captain’s drink. He didn’t notice. “Cherry limeade for me, a starfruit melon for Pilot. A blueberry squidleg-grape for- Oh-” Swimmer looked at Captain’s blue eye. “Hi,” He mumbled, inching Captain’s drink closer to him. “Hi.” Captain stared at his drink. He stirred it with his straw in this limp, tired way.
          Order was the first to speak, “You know them?”
          Captain looked away from Order, mumbling something that might’ve been a yes? He loved avoiding honest answers, not like Captain who was more often truthful than lying.
          “Not a fan of them. They’re childish and they don’t take things seriously. Not a fan. The random idiot with goggles especially,” Captain took a sip of his drink. Swimmer chuckled awkwardly. Things always got so tense when he was around. And it was usually Swimmer’s job to lighten the mood. Even though he sucked at it. “Is this him speaking or Captain? Cause I don’t think Captain’s ever seen Team Blue before.”

CommanderTary

Captain didn’t answer that one. The blue in his eye flickered painfully. He was quick to cover it, grunting. “Hhg- feels like a needle being threaded through my eye and in between the folds in my brain..”
            Swimmer patted Captain’s back, “I’d be saying you need to learn to control him but I have a feeling at this point there’s no point to that?” Captain sighed, twirling his blue dapple in his hand, “If it were up to me, I wouldn’t even have him in me.”
            Captain’s eye flickered blue, causing another bout of pain for him, “Ha! That’s a laugh. If it were up to you, you’d be a rotting corpse on top of those parking lots, idiot. Remember, Captain, I saved you.”
            Swimmer caught Captain’s arm before he could argue, simply shaking his head at him. Captain stood from his seat, his drink only half empty. “Is everyone done with their drinks? We gotta go train. Right now. Especially with our strategy.”
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CommanderTary

No promises.
          
          You were a very simple person. Shockingly so. You loved to read cringy XReader fanfiction (like you’re doing right now….judgemental stare) and you were basically a bright light in the dark. You did have your moments, of course, but most of the time, you could cheer everyone up just by smiling or talking. Despite this, you weren’t very popular anywhere. Guess it comes with the territory of being A WEIRDO!!!! Me too, twin, me too.
          Eventually, you caught wind of a strange manga, one that was known for being funny but being hated for one main aspect. You never learned what that aspect was before you started reading but you did learn about the book’s name and decided to read it, hoping you’d find your escape from the fires and hatred all around you. Though, when you were hoping for a metaphorical escape into a fantasy world, you really didn’t expect to end up being friends with one of the most HATED individuals in the manga (okay well, there’s worse but in universe he’s the most hated so it still counts!) In fact, you didn’t expect to even end up IN the manga world! Wild!!
          Greetings, I’m your story’s narrator, I don’t have a name exactly, but you do. Your name is Y/N L/N. You are the friend of the well known planet destroyer, Marx. The one with hands from the manga. You weren’t expecting to be suddenly brought into the world of the Kirby Manga when you started reading the well-known series. It caught you seriously off-guard. But I mean, who wouldn’t be surprised by the HEAVENLY LIGHT OF THE GODS ABOVE SUCKING YOU INTO THE FICTIONAL WORLD OF THE KIRBY FRANCHISE.
          Let’s cut back to that very morning…shall we? If you’re reading this story a second time and realizing the differences from the last time you read it. I have no idea what you’re talking about. Behold my gaslighting skills!
          

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@Frisktheskelegirl only downside is that I made Y/N and Marx platonic ONLY because since I don’t personally have a crush on Marx anymore, I felt it would be hard for me to write romantic feelings for a character I just think is neat nowadays
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Frisktheskelegirl

@CommanderTary okay! I will definitely be reading it when I get to it ;D
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CommanderTary

Heyyy soo
          
          Something happened a few days ago where a friend called me Tartar outloud and it made me feel extremely happy deep down
          
          Anyways, so I talked with my girlfriend and now I’m going by Tary as a middle ground^^
          
          So please call me Tary moving forward

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I think it’s safe to say that all my Kirby manga stories will be discontinued. I can’t find it in myself to finish them. I’ll post what I have for Chapter 6 of Wings of Dreams (as that’s the only one I have). I’m sorry.
          
          

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Minor vent. But something I just remembered. Apparently there’s this experiment where they give you a snake marshmallow and apparently, if you eat it, you won’t be successful…
          
          Why the fuck does a marshmallow get to dictate if I end up successful or not? Huh? It’s a marshmallow. A fucking marshmallow.