ComradeMax45

С Новым Годом!
          	
          	Happy New Year!
          	
          	Selamat Tahun Baru

ThomsanAniman

Happy New Year Bro!
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alvin_tampan1997

@alvin_tampan1997 Because in the original story Japan was preparing for an invasion of Gra Valkas' homeland along with other countries before it was made into a cliffhanger by the author.
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alvin_tampan1997

@alvin_tampan1997 For the old version, is it true that it will not be continued or in the future will it continue to the part where the Soviet Union prepares to invade Gra Valkas' homeland together with other countries?
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MinhQuanVuong

Uhmmmm author Max, I found something seems interesting. In nhs, the gra valkas assuming the guided weapon are gliding bombs that were dropped by aircraft and manually guided to the target by an operator? Then does that mean it is actually an MXY-7 Ohka plane, you know “cherry blossom” plane and also the one that ww2 Japanese use to banzai the ship? Lol

MinhQuanVuong

Hey max, I am now here to deliver some plot suggestions for your nhs fanfic.
          
          In original nhs and your fanfic. They show gra cabal to guided missile, I think it shouldn’t just guided missile but it should showing many other types weapon such as tank, apc, ifv, warship, helicopter, etc and all of that demonstrates as a video of military training. (If in case this showing guided missile to gra cabal happening again).
          
          Secondly, when the soviet army landing on gra valkas mainland and officially the gra valkas mainland theme. Can we get a lot more tank battle? You know cause gra valkas have very large and powerful industrial scale and now it is currently ground battle on their mainland so logically they should begin to mass producing tank and plane now in order to fighting the attacking force. I also thinking that the Soviet soldier will using suicidal drone to constantly harassing and destroying gra valkan tank. Which by the way since gra valkas tank is ww2 Japanese tank which is really bad (and also is very vastly large) so this would probably like battle of 73 easting with Soviet MBT, IFV, APC and with air support rapidly advancing and decimate them up.
          
          By the way in the story, so Putin is canon and is head of KGB. Hear me out, I before allies invasion on gravies mainland, such massive operation would require a very massive amount of intelligence so can we get a part of where Putin and other officials of KGB planning up a large scale intelligence operation and sabotage operation. I mean like besides main leader character Zhukov and other ministers, I think Putin is the least mentioned so just want to get him more appearing in the story considering he is head of KGB and KGB is one of the important in the story.
          
          Alright for now that is some of the things I suggest, I hope you going well author.

MinhQuanVuong

By the way author Max, in chapter 4  it mentions Quila and Qua Toyne soldier will be armed with modern equipment right? Is it going to be temporary? Like after they done liberation of thier homeland Soviet will then disarm them up and give them ww2 tech only right? Because Soviet knew they have mass advantage of technology in this world so they cannot get anyone else to have same level of tech with them right? By the time when they reach soviet level, the soviet have already making even more gap.
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MinhQuanVuong

Hey author, can I ask you a question?
          
          The question is in your novel what does Soviet economy look like? Because in your story USSR economy have some elements of capitalism like China style economy (and also Vietnam after Đổi Mới reform). So tell me what does Soviet economy fully look like? Such as like are they have worker council?; everytime when a private enterprise expanding do they negotiate with state to gain permission to expand in return become more responsible? (for example like they expanding from medium size to large size and mega size. Btw what is the limit does government allow for private enterprises size? Well about the part of private negotiation with state to expand, it is actually a feature in my style USSR); how efficiently is central economy of Soviet now? Like do they have a very effective planning and information system and unified across the union; overall,what does the entire Soviet economy structure look like?

ComradeMax45

@MinhQuanVuong 2S25 Sprut-SD will be included, so don't worry about it
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ComradeMax45

@MinhQuanVuong I can't tell you what is the Soviet economy in my story fully look like... Let's just say they have similarities to that of Chinese economy but this time the USSR still maintained their worker council
            
            For the effectiveness of the Soviet centralized economy, that's why in 2000s, the Council of Ministers of the USSR under direction of the General Secretary Gennady Zyuganov at that time decided to analysis once again the OGAS project and then implement it for an automated management system for the USSR economy, which is based on the principles of cybernetics and including a computer network connecting data collection and processing centers in all regions of the Union
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MinhQuanVuong

In real life there is a Russian light amphibious tank 2S25 Sprut-SD. So when Soviet begin the amphibious invasion can you include it? It’s fine your decision
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MinhQuanVuong

Happy new year author, have you have a goal for this year yet? And also your fanfic next chapter will be somewhere in this week right? By the way my new year goal will be learn how to draw (so maybe I could help you to illustrate your novel and also drawing fan art)

ComradeMax45

С Новым Годом!
          
          Happy New Year!
          
          Selamat Tahun Baru

ThomsanAniman

Happy New Year Bro!
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alvin_tampan1997

@alvin_tampan1997 Because in the original story Japan was preparing for an invasion of Gra Valkas' homeland along with other countries before it was made into a cliffhanger by the author.
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alvin_tampan1997

@alvin_tampan1997 For the old version, is it true that it will not be continued or in the future will it continue to the part where the Soviet Union prepares to invade Gra Valkas' homeland together with other countries?
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MinhQuanVuong

Hello author, so I got a plot suggestion that you could base on or try out: so apparently in original nhs, you know Japan sent a 7th division to 2nd civilization area right? However here is the part that I see that it is a plot hole, since 2nd civilization is farthest it is a very risky move to sent your force there since the sea is still not fully secured yet and not only that since the force is in 2nd civilization so there will be a lot of logistical and supply issue as well. So here is my fixing, in your story USSR may still sending troops to 2nd civilization but the convoy will be escorted by multiple warship, not only that since the sea is not fully secure so there maybe few skirmishes will happening on the route. After USSR division reaching Mu, there should be a part of constructing large scale supply depot and some form of supply source which basically like help turning a few area in Mu to have better power of supporting supply so now that the USSR troops in Mu can gain supply source on Mu while ussr no need to transport that much supply through ship to Mu. Overall that will fixing the plot hole of supply and logistics by instead of ship transport supply  and also the troops on route to Mu.

MinhQuanVuong

Also extra suggestion: Since you know the new comintern pact nation got weapon of inter war and early ww2 Soviet weapon. Can we see some of battle on some of them? When Gra Valkas sending great fleet to invade USSR, they will also probably attacking some other ncp nation right? By the way will Gra Valkas bringing ground force for invasion landing? If yes then can we get some of gra valkan troops manage to landing on some ncp nations so there will be battle. You know instead of just soviet vs gra valkas on sea but now we will also getting soviet ncp allies vs gra valkan landing troops on their ground as well while ussr assisting their allies. This make the story sound more “realistic” and “larger scale” (extra: when Gra Valkas on the way to invade ussr and their ncp allies, we should get a part of all NCP members planning battle)
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MinhQuanVuong

(By the way about the Sovetsky Soyuz class battleship art I sent you that if I can imagine it was it instead of marshal zhukov class. How does it look?)
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MinhQuanVuong

Not only that, since gra valkas have mind set of using high level of mass quantity combine with mindset of invincible which (and thinking quality is unimportant), I think there should be multiple armored and mechanized divisions instead of 1 sole mechanized divisions compare to original nhs story, also the USSR also have power of mass quantity (+quality) so I think ussr should sending even more divisions into Mu instead japan sending only 7th division, so it will be a very larger scale massive battle it’s like battle of Kursk but between many gra valkan trash tank against very many soviet stronk tank. Furthermore, I think ussr should help Mu to unlock a certain form of anti-tank weapon to deal with Gra Valkas.
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MinhQuanVuong

Hey author Max, in your nhs soviet union fanfic. Can you adding those titan mech from Titanfall 2 video game? Or maybe even those mecha from armored core game series? Cause I think it look cooler than knightmare from code grease, by the way that’s your choice author am fine here.

MinhQuanVuong

Beside of looking badass, it will looking more “practical” and tactical along with “realistically”. Also I think Metal Gear mech could be add in story as well. Anyway it just some suggestion author
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MinhQuanVuong

Hear me out okay? I think the mech with  morebright and colorful appearance like knightmare from code grease is less badass than those with less colorful
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