ConnorGehora

So, it appears that I am back. It has been over a year, and I have returned out of necessity. I have improved as a writer since the last time I found myself on here, but I lack something very important. Feedback. 
          	
          	So I suppose I would like to ask anyone who sees this if they could take a look at the chapter I posted very recently. I would be a very happy man if you could tell me what you think about it!
          	
          	Anyway,
          	
          	That would be all,
          	
          	Good day, stay safe,
          	
          	River

ConnorGehora

So, it appears that I am back. It has been over a year, and I have returned out of necessity. I have improved as a writer since the last time I found myself on here, but I lack something very important. Feedback. 
          
          So I suppose I would like to ask anyone who sees this if they could take a look at the chapter I posted very recently. I would be a very happy man if you could tell me what you think about it!
          
          Anyway,
          
          That would be all,
          
          Good day, stay safe,
          
          River