Contessa17

Work is terrible never grow up

Contessa17

          
          I have a plot in mind I just don't know how to go about it. I tried to do wholesome and foreshadowing for a few chapters but it's not coming out  like I want it to I need feedback and constructive criticism. Is it to depressing? Is it not very good? Is it to slow?I've been stalling from the plot I want to do cause I can't get one character to dispell important information. Ahhh lemon demon why can't you be useful!