I haven't gotten feedback from my friends... And I still might be on hiatus. But I want to publish this chapter I might scrap it though so anyone object to me publishing a possible throw away chapter?
I have a plot in mind I just don't know how to go about it. I tried to do wholesome and foreshadowing for a few chapters but it's not coming out like I want it to I need feedback and constructive criticism. Is it to depressing? Is it not very good? Is it to slow?I've been stalling from the plot I want to do cause I can't get one character to dispell important information. Ahhh lemon demon why can't you be useful!
Due to the update on the hex mod I shall change his appearance chapter go ahead and read it again if you want just had to fix a few continuity errors error error error