I think you should make the girls put up a fight and not make it seem like, like, they are easy. It would made it interesting if the girls played hard to get and did not put out. Like, when Rose instanly fell for Harry that doesn't happen you should make them actually get to know each other Rose didn't fall for him, she fell for his looks. I think all of the girls should get to know the guys and not instanly become ''best friends'' or ''LOve each other in the first minutes they met. I LOVE THE STORY but, that just doesn't happen in real life.
LOVE,KEMMA22