CoralBentley

It's been forever since I've said anything here, but I hope to change that.  Currently, Cyborn is under renovations, again.  I hope the upcoming modifications will please you - if so, kindly let me know.  :)

CoralBentley

Hi, everyone.  Cyborn is going to go through some changes.  My husband made some suggestions, and I agree with them.  It should be more intriguing when I get this new stuff incorporated.  Do feel free to offer ideas, comments, concerns, etc.  I may not take them all, but I'll think about them. :)

CoralBentley

I'm reading an interesting book ("I'm a Cyborg's Pet" by The Scrivener) and something the author mentions is writing to get the story down, not worrying about edits until later.  I'm generally following that process in Evernote, and not posting here until I've examined the chapter with a critical eye.
          
          On Evernote, I'm beginning chapter 42.  I've realized a few story threads I want to weave in and will have to go back to the beginning to edit, and of course the main storyline might change.  I might need to edit chapters that are already here - I've had to do so a few times already.
          
          Do you want me to post a chapter each week, regardless of its 'editedness', or do you like the more polished version I offer (and I'll strive to post weekly but might be late)?

The-Scrivener

Funny story, we were sitting there and decided to rush out to and say thanks to our readers for no reason Coral for your awesomatious votes aimed sweetly at  I'm a Cyborg's Pet. We so appreciate it, hugs. 
          
          RK+Reb

CoralBentley

Also, I've met many teachers - they make a good basis for characters.  We write what we know, with additions, and I'm trying to gather some lists of what I do know.  Like schools, apartments, fields, forests.
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CoralBentley

@The-Scrivener My computer keeps eating my replies.  :P  Schools seem to be an excellent setting for stories - we spend so much time in them.  And when the setting isn't the key of the story, we might as well go with what we know. :)
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The-Scrivener

@CoralBentley cool. Interested in your thoughts on the process of writing.
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CoralBentley

Hi!  I’ve fixed a gaping plot hole - Keith and Chris had had a 24-hr day that the Georges didn’t experience.  Time operates in the expected manner now, and I should be able to post chapters sooner now. 
          
          My first novel, “Of Power,” should be available at the Xlibris bookstore later today. I’m quite excited.