@Corasinante Whether you rewrite it or not is up to you, but to me, it is perfect as is. I love it when someone does a character ooc, because it gives me a new aspect. Another thing I love about it is how goofy you make the story! So it makes sense to make them ooc to go along with the goofiness! I haven't seen a lot of people do goofy x readers so it makes the story one of a kind! So its your decision. (sorry its long)