Trying to write a party scene on this platform is the same as asking guys what their favorite Radiohead song is- you are going to get the same answer every time. /hj
All things to be written are unoriginal at this point, but I try my best to bring authenticity, my own view, and nuance to scene's, trope's, and cliché's while also trying to deliver my point in a stylistic way that's akin to Ernest Hemmingway's, Hills Like White Elephants. Its a great story I recommend you read btw.
If you dont want to go read, basically I try to emulate his "Iceberg Theory"/"Theory of Ommision"- described as "contends that the words on the page should be merely a small part of the whole story—they are the proverbial "tip of the iceberg," and a writer should use as few words as possible in order to indicate the larger, unwritten story that resides below the surface." in the article "Analysis of 'Hills Like White Elephants' by Ernest Hemingway" by Catherine Sustana. https://www.thoughtco.com/hills-like-white-elephants-analysis-299049
Its a curious story I read my senior year in high school and one of the inspiring factors for this book and the relationship between Aiden and Adeline.
Also like the English major I am, I try to use tools, metaphors, and especially diction and *symbolism* to add other elements, tell you more than I write, and provide more information on where the story is going.
thank you for listening to me complain, I hope this clears some things up about my writing and makes you think about the story as it progresses more in depth. :) stay safe, have a good rest of the weekend.
