call me Firebreather

@smilemedead I took it all down after my mother forced me to. She didn't understand that this is a publishing site, and that people couldn't steal it. I would do temp. reposts here and there, but I somehow lost my flash drive.

Chapter 2 of Dragon's School is up, and Chapter 1 was overhauled. Please read and drop a comment.

Hey, I critiqued "Dragon's School" like you asked :)
          
          I'm really sorry it's so harsh, but I meant all of it in the nicest possible way. 
          
          It does seem promising, and I am wanting to read more, it is just really, really rushed... 
          
          anywho, please don't hate me. I am an honest person, and couldn't stand just going "I like it" when there were things bugging me...

ATTENTION ALL READERS: If you currently own Modern Warfare 2, or intend to buy Modern Warfare 3, contact me about joining my clan. It is an independent clan, but we have a contract with SFS. I met Rattlesnake himself, SO BE NICE.
          
          -Firebreather out

Thanks for the comment you made on my story! it was really helpful and greatly appreciated. :)

read a few of your comments on other works. mind reading and critiquing my story in terms of grammar and language? i'll check out your work too.
          
          it's called Bunker "M" - Season 2 (just check out the writing. also, you don't really need to read the first book before this one unless you want to).

I just dominated several matches of MW2. I noticed a pattern. Isreali guns ROCK!