Cosmos2009

Hello again! 
          	I meant to get the new updated lore stuff out today - however, as you can tell..
          	..that did *not* happen.
          	
          	Why?
          	Well, simple. It's a *lot* of stuff that I need to get done, in regards to the general world building and all of that nonsense.
          	So, instead - I've decided to put that on hold for now, and instead focus on getting the updated prologue out first. I've improved a lot on my writing and that sort of stuff - and I'd rather focus on that, than 20,000 words of world-building that, while cool, aren't going to give that much in regards to story.
          	
          	Expect to see the updated prologue soon! I'm still working away on it - and I HOPE to have it out around Monday next week - maybe sooner, maybe later. 
          	
          	If you want to have an idea of what the updated visuals may look like - I'd suggest looking at the new cover I made for that story. I got up around.. a few minutes ago from the time this message is out - so, again. It's new. Let me know what you guys think about it!
          	
          	Sorry for the delay, and thanks for waiting.

Cosmos2009

Okay - so, surprise! I just published the re-write of the prologue! It took far less time to write than I expected - so, let me know what you guys think about my new style of writing these chapters. I wanna know if I can improve on them or whatnot.
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Cosmos2009

Hello again! 
          I meant to get the new updated lore stuff out today - however, as you can tell..
          ..that did *not* happen.
          
          Why?
          Well, simple. It's a *lot* of stuff that I need to get done, in regards to the general world building and all of that nonsense.
          So, instead - I've decided to put that on hold for now, and instead focus on getting the updated prologue out first. I've improved a lot on my writing and that sort of stuff - and I'd rather focus on that, than 20,000 words of world-building that, while cool, aren't going to give that much in regards to story.
          
          Expect to see the updated prologue soon! I'm still working away on it - and I HOPE to have it out around Monday next week - maybe sooner, maybe later. 
          
          If you want to have an idea of what the updated visuals may look like - I'd suggest looking at the new cover I made for that story. I got up around.. a few minutes ago from the time this message is out - so, again. It's new. Let me know what you guys think about it!
          
          Sorry for the delay, and thanks for waiting.

Cosmos2009

Okay - so, surprise! I just published the re-write of the prologue! It took far less time to write than I expected - so, let me know what you guys think about my new style of writing these chapters. I wanna know if I can improve on them or whatnot.
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Cosmos2009

Hello! I'm, uh, sorry for being incredibly inactive as of late. Lots of stuff in life has come up, and I've been quite busy getting IRL stuff done. But! I haven't forgotten about you guys - I'm still working on finishing up that DVN fanfic I meant to finish.. uh.. (checks watch) OH JESUS CHRIST - you get the idea. Sorry for the wait, but I'm almost done rewriting a good amount of stuff. Expect something within (hopefully) the next few weeks. Starting with a massive rewrite to that very very first chapter with all that lore - as there's quite a bit I need to add.
          
          And, uh, as for why it's been taking so long excluding real life factors..
          ..it's been kind of confusing on how to write *literal cosmic horror* into a DVN fan fiction. Yeah. It's getting kinda wild. 
          
          Thanks for waiting.

Cosmos2009

@hailstorm75 Don't worry - I haven't been active here myself.  I think I'll have the re-written lore stuff done by.. hopefully next week? It's.. QUITE a bit of new stuff I have to add there.
            
            Well.
            Quite a bit is a, uh, understatement. The rewritten section for the very first part sits at about 5000-ish words. And I'm expecting for the full thing to be nearly double that, at the very least. It's a lot, trust me on that much.
            
            The big thing I wanted to tackle by rewriting it is to, well, give a **ton** of context and that stuff that I felt was missing. Like, sure - you know who the nations are. But what about its people? What about those groups that are operating separate of the rest? What's going on with them? Who are they?
            
            That's the main thing that's adding up so much to that section - along with detailing the actual events of, well, the second big war that happens. Because right now - you don't really have that much context. Just that "oops dominia is kill lol", and that some big war went down. I just think it'd be cool to know what actually happened.
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hailstorm75

@Cosmos2009 i pretty much just... forgot that wattpad existed for a while, so i probably missed most of the chapters. thoughn im still looking forward to the next chapters!
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hailstorm75

@Cosmos2009 dont worry bro ill wait until gta 7 to come out just for a chapter
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hailstorm75

yo whered your dvn book go??

hailstorm75

oh thats fine. looking forward to the story
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Cosmos2009

@hailstorm75 
            I’m still working on it.
            
            But… it’s taking a while. The draft document I had got wiped by my school district. It kinda sucks.
            
            But I’m still working on.
            Also—to tide over this *ungodly* long wait, I’m working on a little short story within the same offshoot of the DvN universe. 
            
            I should have the first few bits of it done by tonight, and published!
            
            Sorry for the wait.
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