CossetSanchez

Thank you:) I like your suggestion... And I agree! :) thanks for the advice!

XXObliviousXX

Hiya just wanted to comment on your story my friend. I think the last line should be changed since till the end and forever are the same.... But, it's really your choice! Just a suggestion though. Great poem throughout. It's fulfilling and inspiring. Certainly would help your friend.  :)