CouldYouJust

WAS NO ONE GOING TO TELL ME THAT SHE-RA IS DELIGHTFUL? 
          	
          	I just met Entrapta and she's my favorite already

CouldYouJust

@starwars582 I don't think I have a meaningful plot for a she-ra story, my next planned stories are a Murder Drones story and the continuation of my Arcane story
Reply

starwars582

@CouldYouJust you're probably very busy but do  you think you could ever make a story about it after you finish your red eyes book  p
          	  Also I know it's a bit late but great job in the latest chapter
Reply

CouldYouJust

yes, I finished it in 3 days and love it deeply
Reply

CouldYouJust

WAS NO ONE GOING TO TELL ME THAT SHE-RA IS DELIGHTFUL? 
          
          I just met Entrapta and she's my favorite already

CouldYouJust

@starwars582 I don't think I have a meaningful plot for a she-ra story, my next planned stories are a Murder Drones story and the continuation of my Arcane story
Reply

starwars582

@CouldYouJust you're probably very busy but do  you think you could ever make a story about it after you finish your red eyes book  p
            Also I know it's a bit late but great job in the latest chapter
Reply

CouldYouJust

yes, I finished it in 3 days and love it deeply
Reply

TheBeyondMan

Wanted to first state that I have found myself enjoying your stories quite immensely, and I wanted to thank you for writing this great work of art.
          
          Now that's out of the way, though it's still the most important, I do have a question. Are you in need of an editor? 
          My name is Sam, and I've been following your Red Eyes novel for some time now. I noticed errors here and there in your (still wonderful) work, which is completely natural and expected, however, it brings me to ask if you would like me to help take some of the load off of you. I'm good with tedious items, like grammatical corrections and reviewing comprehension, and I think I can be quite the muse at times if it's asked of me.
          I do not want payment, I only want to help. I pray this doesn't seem like a bot, but I SWEAR I do it only for the love of the game. If you ARE interested, please contact me and we can figure out another means of communication (preferably Discord), considering I know very little about this app.
          If you decline, I wouldn't mind. My offer will always stand, because quite honestly I don't have enough to do and I'm somewhat scared to start my own series. Plus, I just like helping people.

CouldYouJust

@TheBeyondMan that sounds wonderful, im sorry I havent responded sooner, I turned off notifications since i got so many and I dont use my wall often 
Reply

CouldYouJust

Would love some recommendations for stuff to read, preferably stuff with decent to good grammar, cause I'm feeling picky lol, plz and thank you.

Marbbsy

@CouldYouJust https://archiveofourown.org/works/30810230/chapters/76056248 not everyone's cup of tea but as i am one to prefer the longer stories anywhere i read this stood out as something unique [and long asf] its a darker take on the normal undertale story so keep that in mind but the plot is nice and juicy as far as I'm concerned as for the grammar requirement you noted it fits in a good category if my memory serves me well i feel kind of redundant recommending an undertale story as that's probable everyone's first pick to recommend but i think its unique enough to still post as a recommendation
Reply

starwars582

Can I ask you a question 

rayray0620

@starwars582 I might have just assumed that you want Frisk to be a love interest for Y/N my bad on that. But from what I have seen, she might become one.
            
            Frisk after all reset multiples times over and over, getting the same ending where Y/N is gone, alive but different or just straight up dead. She killed people that she cared about, did multiple genocides and left the underground empty so many times just to test out if something changed for Y/N each time she gets an ending (It's not even guaranteed that something will change each time she does so and she still does it regardless!). And I haven't even mentioned how she basically had to redo everything from the start if Y/N was gone. Imagine the time it took for her to do everything. We know that it took like 2 months for her to free Monsterkind from the underground but we haven't accounted the times where she did the same or the genocide routes multiple times. If she resets each time she did an ending 50 times, she would have did a whole 8 years of doing the same thing over and over just for Y/N to come back alive and still the same.
            
            I just can't help but question what else did Y/N do for her back when she hasn't gotten her powers because she is literally doing so much just for him to come back.
            
            So Frisk might be a potential love interest. Maybe.
            
            If she is, then I'm just gonna wait for the chapter where we'll have a flashback of the times Y/N made her love him. And I could already imagine the scenarios that will happen. Like Y/N and Frisk running away together from (something something problem sob) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYs5-6SWkng&list=RDCYs5-6SWkng&start_radio=1&pp=ygUHcnVuYXdheaAHAQ%3D%3D
Reply

starwars582

@supercastler what do you mean confuse expression "?
Reply

CouldYouJust

@starwars582 questions questions, but I'm not one to spoil answers
Reply

starwars582

Can I ask you a question 

CouldYouJust

@starwars582 hard to say, i plan pm finishing it, but I don't know how long it's going to end up being. I doubt it'll be more than 200 chapters long
Reply

starwars582

@CouldYouJust one more quick question how far do you plan to go in your undertale book
Reply

CouldYouJust

@starwars582 I'd consider it, but I write slowly, as I'm pretty busy
Reply

CouldYouJust

Recently, I got obsessed with Murder Drones, anyone have some good fic recommendations?