Look, I'm sorry you hate my story, but can you please not say something so mean like that? I know I'm not a good writer, but I'm basing off the original one that the original writer left off. So I'm here to say that, I'm sorry that I didn't meet your expectations, and I hope one day you would consider reading my books. In the mean time, thank you for your feedback, I will try and reconstruct the story in the future.