CourageDontDesertMe

@Cucumber13 Your message actually got me thinking about my story. I have not given it much thought recently but when i have more time i will post more i promise! I just need to get past this week and then i should be good! Don't give up on me!

VeeraDilara

I'd like to read ur comments

VeeraDilara

@ CourageDontDesertMe  thank you so much for the feedback,  I know that the flashbacks are quite tiring to read and trust le I'm speaking out of experience but the reason I even brough it up is to understand the characters personality and their choices,  sometimes when I read other books,  I always wonder why the lain character would do such a thing unless something had happened before or... or.. 
            I just hate leaving the readers confused but again,  thank you for the feedback, it really makes my day.
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CourageDontDesertMe

@ThaliaRoyam  On your story? It's honestly one of my favorites so far. I love your style and how much detail you put into it. Honestly great job, this book deserves to be way more popular. 
            
            If i may critique something tho; some times the flash backs or when someone is telling a story it tends to run on for a long time. Which is great because the detail you are giving is amazing but some breaks in between might be good but its your story and im loving it either way. :)
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