Califia
Hey Courtney~~I like your stories--they just need a little more of an erotic slant. See my story, "A Walk in the Countryside" for an illustration of what I mean: http://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside. [Warning: Part 4 is mega-hot and might push you out of your comfort zone. It was intended for big girls. . . so if you are one. . . best to read this conclusion in bed] :) Enjoy! ~~Califia