Hey Courtney~~I like your stories--they just need a little more of an erotic slant.
See my story, "A Walk in the Countryside" for an illustration of what I mean:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside.
[Warning: Part 4 is mega-hot and might push you out of your comfort zone. It was intended for big girls. . . so if you are one. . . best to read this conclusion in bed] :)
Enjoy!
~~Califia