SJHauthor

Hi there you got some great book choices in your list really enjoyed clicking through.
          
          I also just published my first story and could use some opinion on what I could make better or change...would you mind checking it out if you find time?
          
          Thanks in advance!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/297598538?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=SJHauthor&wp_originator=XnGn7Cx0IKCeVapZv8wKN5AGQMNBm3FsjMfrt1o2nJqHU0FVIsuRteI5s%2BMZTvFeC%2FjJlNCccXVCvvVLVUVtJqrqKMpRiZgj%2BK06EGPg6Yu6e1IlsMDOykTNFTpnML43