underthestars232

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327826633?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=under_the_stars232&wp_originator=NIlGA9aTFhHESJ6OnskzIJBlKGczabbZ4kaORp71rqYZ%2FMSlgy51xSqjbG1xyGeroeMyhp7fU3Ef%2BIp6JaI1z4F051OAwsc6f64%2F5EGv7S404aUGNltvS6%2FI%2FFxD7K6H

mckinley_parker

Hi @CozyCloudy my sister just made a book called "stuck in the middle" I honestly don't know what the heck it's about but I don't want her to get sad if nobody reads it so that's why I came to you. You don't have to and I don't blame you if you choose not to.

mckinley_parker

@Roromes4 btw thank you so much Cozy cloudy!!!
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CozyCloudy

@mckinley_parker I'll see! What's her @?
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