CrashCrushed

It's great when people point out, grantedly, incorrect, yet irrelevant details in your work.

justsimplyjulia

Regarding Belief:
          Might I be so bold as to offer some helpful criticism? This is a lovely story and I understand you're trying to implicate a reoccurring pet name for the main character, and darling is always a fun one! But I've noticed that it's being a little over used. Try to use it less frequently. You can still make Tom sound charming and sweet without using it so often! Try using it only when the main character has DONE something to earn the nickname. Perhaps when she does something cute or witty etc. But keep up the good writing! Love it so far. 

CrashCrushed

WOW! 'Belief' is close to a quarter of a million reads! What. The. Actual. F? That is insane! And it's all thanks to you lovely lot.
          
          Never did I think when I was writing it, my first story, that it would EVER achieve that amount of reads. It is amazing to see the notifications I STILL get when you read it.
          
          Can't thank you all enough!