CrazedHellion

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I come with news of Dragon Layer Chaoter 1 as I wait for Rimworld to finish getting to the main menu (I modded the fuck out of it). Chapter 1 will be centered around Yumiko’s perspective and is possibly going to be the shortest I’ve written so far. Additionally, this chapter will be a bit slower than the rest as well, there’ll be action but it won’t be very much. I don’t really have much to say about this one to be honest with you, besides letting you know it’s coming along well, I don’t have much to say at the moment. Well, have a wonderful day/night/whatever time of day it is for you and pray I get Rimworld to run!

rtomford71

@CrazedHellion nice! I can’t wait to see :) 
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CrazedHellion

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I come with news of Dragon Layer Chaoter 1 as I wait for Rimworld to finish getting to the main menu (I modded the fuck out of it). Chapter 1 will be centered around Yumiko’s perspective and is possibly going to be the shortest I’ve written so far. Additionally, this chapter will be a bit slower than the rest as well, there’ll be action but it won’t be very much. I don’t really have much to say about this one to be honest with you, besides letting you know it’s coming along well, I don’t have much to say at the moment. Well, have a wonderful day/night/whatever time of day it is for you and pray I get Rimworld to run!

rtomford71

@CrazedHellion nice! I can’t wait to see :) 
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rtomford71

Hi sorry for posting here but it wouldn’t let me reply to your last comment, but thank you! And if he doesn’t appear no worries! :) 
          
          I was also thinking like you said he’s kind of an outcast in his family and species and he’s very
          Thick compared to regular male dragons lol

rtomford71

@CrazedHellion cool I can’t wait to see what it is! :) 
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CrazedHellion

@rtomford71 oh trust me, something gets designed. Something I have planned since the early stages of Dragon Layer, I will not say what, but it is something I giggle to myself about every time I think about it, it ain’t a harness but it’s something.
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rtomford71

@CrazedHellion ok sounds good! I can’t wait to see :) also I just thought of a small thing since Yumiko likes getting tied up maybe Theo secretly designed a harness for her so she can be restrained as much as she wants lol sorry just a random idea I got lol 
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CrazedHellion

I was thinking about stuff I wanted to add to Dragon Layer, new members to the main cast, various types of intelligent species besides humans and dragons, storylines and so much more. There’s so much I wanna add as soon as I can while saving certain stuff for later books when I can explore those ideas more. I’ve always intended for Book 1 to be around 15-20 chapters if I can help it. Things I want to add before book 1 wraps up though are: 3-5 New Permanent characters added to the Break of Dawn, introduce all intelligent life on Cradle, go over the backstories of the core members of Gramps’ team (Mina, Ajax, Greg, and Gramps), and go over Theodore and Yumiko’s backstories. If I can’t fill it with the main stuff I want, I am open to filler suggestions. They probably won’t be popped out right away, and I would like to emphasize that there is a very real chance they might not appear at all, but I’d love to hear ideas from readers who enjoy Dragon Layer. It would also be preferable if the suggested filler chapters were kept focused around the main cast as well. Anyway, that’s all for now, have a wonderful day/night/whatever time of day it is for you!

CrazedHellion

@rtomford71 just to be clear, you’re asking for a gay dragon sub? That is a bit of a tough ask, dragons on Cradle are planned to be more interested in Heterosexual relationships rather than homosexual ones. However, assuming you’re asking for a Dragon Femboy, which is the route I would take with his human form, scenes would be pretty sparse as I would like to keep focus on straight scenes. Now, with all that said, I do have to admit I’ve seen you take a lot of interest in Dragon Layer, so as a personal thank you, a gay dragon femboy sub is very much in the ballpark of possibility. Though he would be an anomaly among his kind rather than the rule.
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rtomford71

@CrazedHellion Nice!! I can’t wait! :) also I was curious if you could add one male dragon to the harem? If not no worries I was just thinking he could be the runt of his family and looked down on and when he seen the Mc and Yumiko banging he wants that to 
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CrazedHellion

@rtomford71 good question, very good question. I found myself asking this quite a lot more than I thought. The title alone tells the reader that the protagonist will be sleeping around with dragons, so I decided, ultimately, that yes, there will be harem dynamics so people don’t get bored watching Yumiko get railed day in and day out. Other female creatures do fall in love with him, but so far they’re planned to be dragon or dragon-adjacent. However, if we’re again looping back to that Kitsune and Kelpie thing, I’d say there’s a fair enough chance a few non-dragons slip in there!
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CrazedHellion

It took me a little over an hour to complete... but I did it. The full second half of the prologue has been released and I couldn't be happier. I hope you all enjoy it, I made some edits here and there and adjusted a few things, but I'm very happy with how the final product turned out. I hope you all enjoy it! Have a wonderful day/night/whatever time of day it is for you!

CrazedHellion

I have done it. Part 2 of Dragon Layer’s prologue is finally done. Almost. All that’s left now is to proofread and provide corrections to spelling and grammar errors throughout. My excitement is immeasurable, I’m really happy with how this turned out. I was worried I’d have to extend the deadline I made yesterday by an extra day because I was busy for a good portion of the day, but I’m happy to say that Dragon Layer part 2 will be released sometime within the next hour! Also, Part 1 of the prologue was 8 pages long on the Google Doc, I provided 4.5 pages of a 13 page chapter. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do! Have a wonderful day/night/whatever time it is for you!

CrazedHellion

My bad, I meant 15 pages, not 13 lol
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CrazedHellion

Two scenes remain for Prologue Part 2 of Dragon Layer, an action scene and an ending scene. Something I noticed about the first part is that Gramps didn’t get to show off his skills, Mina and Ajax did but Gramps sort of stood around barking orders, so in this part Gramps will have a much more active role in the fight. Additionally, I wanna add that the chapter’s completion is imminent. I’ve been pretty on top of it lately and I’m going to try and finish it today but I do have family over for the next few days so it could be tomorrow or the day after. Either way, I’ll let y’all know when it’s about to be published. Have a wonderful day/night/whatever time of day it is for you!

CrazedHellion

As I inch closer to finishing Dragon Layer Prologue Part 2, I’d like to share a bit of lore on 2 things: the planet, and the highest form of Warrior.
          
           The planet’s name is Cradle, it’s landscape consists mostly of tall, Rocky Mountains that make travel by land difficult, the use of Grav-ships, ships that cannot breach the upper atmosphere, is basically required. When humans arrived on Cradle, the planet’s name was infested with Dragons, to this day no one has divined their origin, but advancements have been made using their blood as a source of fuel.
          
           Next I’d like to share the title of Manslayer. Manslayer is a title granted to humans who have killed enough people that they can no longer be killed by anyone save a dragon or another Manslayer. That said, as morbid as the name sounds, Manslayers are not always as evil as the title suggests. Some few have been granted the title through righteous and noble means, even fewer hate the title they’ve been given.
          
           That’s all for now, it’s back to work for me, have a wonderful night/day/whatever time it is for you!

CrazedHellion

There’s a few ideas for dragons in Dragon Layer that’ve been swimming in my head, one idea is this dragon that’s closer in shape to something like one of the ancient dragons in Elden Ring but with two extremely long, scourge-like tails it can use like a weapon. Admittedly, I got that idea from Cluny the Scourge from Redwall. Another idea was for a dragon trapped in a Sisyphean punishment because it was so powerful that it threatened the whole of the world. Anyway, I don’t know if I’ll go through with these ideas, at least not in this book (I have plans to make Dragon Layer into a series) so there’s a good chance that they’ll both show up at some point.

rtomford71

@CrazedHellion I can’t wait to see! :) 
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CrazedHellion

I’m thinking about taking a creative Writing class in College. I was looking through the catalogue when I found a class that specializes in Fiction, which, as you know, I typically jive with. I think I might take it for a semester or two while I take a Spanish or Japanese class. Who knows, maybe it’ll help me improve my craft and make my passion project even better. Anyway, that’s just a thought of mine, y’all have a wonderful day/night/whatever time it is for you!

CrazedHellion

A preview of Prologue Part 2 has been released, I left a note that goes over everything but just know that this preview will be up right until the full part 2 is released. That said, do enjoy and have a wonderful day/night/whatever time of day it is for you!