CrazyMindsRock

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HouseOfVEN

Hi! Mind reading my fiction book? It would mean a lot :D Thanks xoxo

CrazyMindsRock

It's really good, but you have a slight issue with how you tell the story. One minute you speak past tense, and then you used future tense. This is confusing and makes it harder to understand. I'd suggest going into your story and fixing that.
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