Tink4me
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Regarding "My Mates A Cheater"...
Girl, I'm gonna be frank...
Get Off Your Ass And Finish This Story.
Great concept
Well written, articulate, descriptive and captivating.
*I would like more from her sister's besides sex...their back story, character development. You are establishing a plotline, I get it.
Since She is his Luna, more on that aspect please. Maybe, she only works half her time at Work/Pack?
We still haven't met his Family, Beta, Gamma. Adjoining packs?
Enemies? Her competitors? Allies?
Kayla's mate story?
Maybe one of the ex's,or her sister's rejected their mate in order to be with Sébastien?
Consider if the two sisters learn they are both his Mistress's. When he won't reject Kelly They Both decide to kidnap the POS and Kelly needs to Save His Ass.
Perhaps, during his year(s) of abduction...
Not Only Does Kelly Take Full Control of the Pack, She Improves, increases Pack's Strength Ranking and membership in his absence?.
Add A Very Persistent Love Interest, perhaps a Powerful Billionare Human, or is he? Mischievous eye roll.
Oh, the possibilities!
leeannb85
@Tink4me I agree with you all the way. But judging by the fact that she hasn't updated or commented in over five years I doubt this story will be finished. I think we're going to have to imagine the rest ourselves. I'm starting to wonder if something, God forbid, happened to her. She seemed so excited by the story's popularity and was looking to improve by possibly changing the cover. Then suddenly nothing. Weird!
