Crazyangel15

@bookloveforever Awww, well I'm not that great at poetry myself haha, you'll get better with practice :) Awww that'd be great! Thank you so much for thinking of me <3 

TheOrangutan

@Crazyangel15 - a critique can range from a simple, "nice, but I think you spelled 'the' wrong on page 2 to a full on "this was ok but you need to user stronger sentences in your action scenes, less descriptive and concentrate on your grammer.... " and so on. A simple "I liked it" is kinda cool too though =] Glad you like my poetry. Cheers, Gav