@Crazylplpl I like how you describe everything with such detail, and how different the story is then the average werewolf story you know? I also like how you go into the back with such...idk passion! It’s really good. The only thing I would change is maybe not write so many words like all together, it looks like too much to read ya know? Like just space it out. Other then that your story is amazing, the amount of reads you have with only 2 chapters is pretty cool! This story is going placesssss!!!!! I’m excited to seee more chapters!! :)