@PhiaMarie_22 Yes, I read it. Though you might wanna capitalize your words often if you wanna perfect it. It's still great, even tho I'm not a fan of the characters you put in it. Was it EXO? It's EXO right?
I'm terribly sorry, but I'ven't thought about new ideas now. Guess you have to find new one in our imaginative brain~! Good luck!
I've also updated my story. Read it if you're interested.