CredenceStorm

Sorry I haven't updated my stories lately. School has been getting in the way and I just haven't had time to write them. I will try to get my next chapter up as soon as possible.

MarteenaRV

Hi! I've checked your book "War from under the bed" and I liked it a lot! Very creative idea and a smooth writing style. Sometimes it looks like you forget that the protagonist is a small child and make her have more mature thoughts (which is a con) but that can be easily fixed with some editing. I think it's a great story and I'll be sure to finish it when I can! 

CredenceStorm

@MarteenaRV  I am so glad that you like it. I am thankful for the feedback and will keep it in mind if I ever decide to edit it!
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