CreepystoRie5

So Ive been really fixated on the FNAF lore recently and I'm thinking about writing a FNAF story. I don't really know what I want to do with it. Maybe an alternative universe of some kind? Any ideas are appreciated 

Lovell2004

@CreepystoRie5
          	  Yeah. I thought about doing something like that for my crossover, but decided the idea of Afton framing someone would fit more smoothly into the tone and events of my story. Still, doesn't mean someone else can't make use of that idea. If you wanna go that route, I'm sure it'll be fun.
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CreepystoRie5

@Lovell2004 Ive seen that video. Very well made. I feel like I could make that work, something similar to the Silver Eyes canon William Afton 
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Lovell2004

@CreepystoRie5
          	  There's a pretty cool fan made video on YouTube where Freddy Krueger gets interviewed about his crimes and his past by a detective only to burn the recording device when the detective has to be dragged out of the room to keep from beating Freddy. Maybe you could make something similar to that, but have it be between Afton and Clay Burk? I think that could be cool to read.
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CreepystoRie5

So Ive been really fixated on the FNAF lore recently and I'm thinking about writing a FNAF story. I don't really know what I want to do with it. Maybe an alternative universe of some kind? Any ideas are appreciated 

Lovell2004

@CreepystoRie5
            Yeah. I thought about doing something like that for my crossover, but decided the idea of Afton framing someone would fit more smoothly into the tone and events of my story. Still, doesn't mean someone else can't make use of that idea. If you wanna go that route, I'm sure it'll be fun.
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CreepystoRie5

@Lovell2004 Ive seen that video. Very well made. I feel like I could make that work, something similar to the Silver Eyes canon William Afton 
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Lovell2004

@CreepystoRie5
            There's a pretty cool fan made video on YouTube where Freddy Krueger gets interviewed about his crimes and his past by a detective only to burn the recording device when the detective has to be dragged out of the room to keep from beating Freddy. Maybe you could make something similar to that, but have it be between Afton and Clay Burk? I think that could be cool to read.
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CreepystoRie5

So, for those Jeffery Keaton fans out there I'm writing a story based on that version of Jeff 

Ravensikkness

@CreepystoRie5 I know, I don't really talk about it a whole lot because most people don't bring up his JTK. It's usually David Near's Jeffrey Mason that I hear about. David and I are all good. He's great. But yeah, Patrick lured me with offers for roles in his projects and stuff. But like I said, feel free to write what you want. You're good. :)
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Ravensikkness

@CreepystoRie5 tbh, I used to like that version of Jeff the killer, but Patrick groomed me and used me for free nudes. So, I will not be reading anything Jeff Keaton. You're free to write your version of that version of JTK, I'm not gonna ask you to not write it, because I don't control nobody.
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CreepystoRie5

@Lovell2004 It's going to be a rewrite of the story
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CreepystoRie5

@Lovell2004 It depends on how big and grand scale of a company you want Fazbear Entertainment to be in this universe. If it's going to be a huge mega corporation like it is portrayed in Security Breach then I think her parents simply being higher ups in the company would work as a motive for Jeff to attack them 

CreepystoRie5

So, while I brainstorm for Jeff The Killer, I want to do a Michael Myers story for Halloween! I want to do something not necessarily connected to the movies maybe just a short story of some kind. Any ideas would be appreciated 

Lovell2004

@CreepystoRie5
            I guess like...what reason should Jeff have for attacking Jane's family specifically? That's one of the main things. Like, I want her parents having ties to Fazbear Entertainment, but I'm not sure what those ties should actually be.
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CreepystoRie5

@Lovell2004 Sorry for just now responding to this, work has been hectic. Okay, so I do really like what you have in mind for Jane so far. What specific idea do you need help with? 
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Lovell2004

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@CreepystoRie5
            I'm writing Jane as the type of character who's driven mainly by insecurity and the desire for purpose. In my series, she grows up as an outcast thanks to her looks and macabre interests and her parents, despite caring for her deeply, are emotionally distant thanks to issues of their own from serving in the military before she was born. They aren't grossly negligent or anything. They always make sure her basic are met, but they don't openly show Jane much affection. This, combined with the bullying, has bad effects on her self-worth. She kind of becomes an overachiever in school to compensate for this, which goes on for years. As time goes on, Jane develops few friendships and gets into fights to protect other kids. Her parents die when she's sixteen. Jeff has been running around for two years at this point and killing those with ties to Fazbear Entertainment. After their deaths, she's sent to live with her aunt and uncle in Remedy and spends the next two years in therapy. She also forms a close relationship with Liu. Just a quick note, Jane used to play with Jeff and Liu at Freddy's before the murders, but her family was one of many that moved away and they don't keep in touch very much. After my take in the novel trilogy, I plan on there being a riot in Remedy brought on by Slenderman and the Proxies. Similar to the Jeff Keaton series, but Jeff won't be the primary cause this time. Jane loses her aunt and uncle before meeting up with other survivors who are trying to fight back against the Proxies and help people escape. I can't spoil too much about that, but...let's just say Jane goes through some shit. She flees Remedy with most of her new friends and becomes a vigilante of sorts. Now trying to bring down the Proxies and Fazbear Entertainment. Her motives are split between wanting revenge and wanting to prevent other families from being torn apart like her's. It offers a break from her feelings of inferiority. Not a long-lasting one, but still.
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