AlexDirector1

@Crepper201567 I need your help setting up the plot in detail from "The Massification" I'm working on.
          
          You know, the one where Y/n moves out, but realizes his mistake at the end?

Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 At first, he tries to find a place to live, but he is turned away because he is a minor. Consequently, he ends up living under a bridge—or rather, in a makeshift apartment beneath one. Things go well at first, but eventually, he is evicted and forced to live on the streets. Masami finds him there, takes him home, and gives him something to eat. Then Yuki appears and asks why she brought home a stray dog; Masami reminds her that it’s actually T/N, and Yuki apologizes. Afterward, Masami calls the boys to arrange for T/N’s return home. The boys try to convince him to come back, but T/N refuses, insisting he won't return until they—along with Mom and Dad—apologize and start doing their fair share of the chores. Gumball says no, but Darwin and Anais agree; so, Darwin and Anais gag Gumball, forcing him to agree as well. Mom, however, remains cold and distant until Masami confronts her, calling her out over her treatment of T/N. Finally, Nicole realizes that she is turning into her own mother; she goes to find Richard, and together they search for T/N in the park. They spot Masami, who tells them she has already spoken with his parents. The parents then appear, and T/N apologizes for yelling at them and for everything else that happened. Nicole replies, "No, son, I’m just as much to blame. I didn't consider your feelings, and I was turning into my own mother. Please, forgive me." When they return home, they find the house in perfect order—the boys have cleaned up and cooked a meal. T/N looks at Masami, hugs her, and says, "Thank you for rescuing me, Cotton-top." A single tear rolls down her cheek as she replies, "You're welcome."
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Crepper201567

@Crepper201567 This continues until T/N arrives home and starts doing the same chores. The straw that finally breaks the camel's back comes when Nicol tells him to take out the trash; seeing garbage strewn everywhere, he—for the first time—says, "No." Everyone falls silent. Nicol asks, "What did you just say?" and T/N simply replies, "No." A heated argument ensues, with Nicol insisting that since he is the eldest son, he is obligated to help around the house. T/N retorts that *she* is the mother and *she* should be helping, pointing out that they dump all the responsibility on him while his dad and the younger kids act like a bunch of lazy leeches. To make matters worse, his dad steps in, asserting that he is the father and T/N must do whatever he says. T/N retreats to his room. The next day, he asks why no one woke him up early for an exam; Nicol tells him that he is an adult and needs to wake himself up. Later, he heads to the kitchen but is told he isn't allowed to use it—nor the bathroom—unless he pays. The following day, he buys his own food and toilet paper. Nicol confronts him, asking why he is cooking with his own food; T/N replies that it belongs to him because he bought it himself—and he’s even using his own frying pan. Another fight breaks out, with Nicol insisting that it is *her* house, *her* apartment, and *her* furniture. T/N finally explodes, declaring that absolutely nothing in the place actually belongs to her. Nicol retorts that as long as he lives under her roof, he will do exactly as she says. In a sequence mirroring the episode "The Decisions," T/N storms out of the house for good, shouting that he would rather leave than live like a slave. Nicol and Richard yell after him that if he walks out now, he’d better not ever come back—and with that, he leaves.
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Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 Eventually, Masami asks him if he would like to go on a date in the park; he eagerly agrees, and before leaving, he gives her a kiss on the lips. However, what he hadn't counted on was his mother ordering him to mow the lawn, clean the kitchen, and cook. By the time T/N had finished all the chores, he hadn't realized that he had missed his date. The next day, Masami is furious that he stood her up; yet, seeing how exhausted T/N looks, she softens. T/N apologizes, telling her to go ahead and electrocute him if she wishes. Masami eventually calms down—though she remains annoyed—and asks him what is going on. He explains that he does absolutely everything around the house while the rest of his family offers no help whatsoever, forcing him to sacrifice his hobbies—and even his time with her—just to keep up with the chores. Feeling sympathy for him, Masami asks, "Have you ever thought about rebelling?" T/N is left deep in thought.
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SpartanRoyal101

Hey I have some good news mate. I am now working on the lemons for my Monster High story. If you have any other lemon ideas I should use for any of my other Monster High stories please let me know.

Crepper201567

@SpartanRoyal101 Another example: Draculaura and Y/N's dhampir children (Lucifer L/N: androgynous appearance, has Draculaura's birthmark, is a boy) (Carmilla L/N: appearance closely resembles Draculaura with Y/N's hair and is tall, is a girl) (Draven L/N: appearance closely resembles Y/N but with Draculaura's hair and height, and is a boy)
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Crepper201567

@SpartanRoyal101 For example, Clawdeen's children could be like this: (Luna Wolf: appearance resembles Clawdeen in human form and is a girl) (Fenrir Wolf: appearance resembles Y/N in wolf form and is a boy) (Morgan Wolf: appearance is a mix of Clawdeen and Y/N in wolf form and is a girl) (Zephyr Wolf: appearance is a mix of Y/N and Clawdeen, with black hair like his grandmother Athena, and is a boy)
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AlexDirector1

@Crepper201567 I've started rewriting the car chase sequence in The Getaway, but the only problem is that I don't know how to integrate your ideas in order. I've finished the start of it, but now Idk the rest of it.

Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 And while that's happening, Mom and Dad are relaxing on the cruise, which is almost over, when the news comes on with the headline (We interrupt this vacation for this breaking news: police are chasing a car with what appears to be high school students, and I'm informed that the suspect appears in this sketch. If you have any more information, please let us know). The police chase is shown, and a poorly drawn picture of the suspect, Y/N, appears. Nicole and Richard notice and chase after the kids. Meanwhile, Y/N accidentally drives the wrong way, and Masami, sitting next to Y/N, says "wrong way!" and springs into action, ordering Anais to come up with a plan. She says everyone needs to cooperate, and they all work together to take down the police. Leslie and Sarah throw dirt and ice cream at the police car windows, Banana throws a banana peel (a Mario Kart reference), Penny shoots fire onto the road to make the tires explode, and Gumball grabs Darwin like a minigun and shoots candy (a reference to Simian and his trophy). While they're being chased, the police put spikes on the road, but Y/N tells Bobert to use rockets on the car, and they go even faster. But they go over a bridge, and even worse, the brakes fail! They see a bridge under construction and go flying, screaming, and land in their house. Everyone celebrates. Gumball and Penny kiss passionately, Darwin and Carrie hug, landing but blushing. The others celebrate and cry, and Masami frantically kisses Jr.'s cheeks, her hair messy and covering his face.
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AlexDirector1

Yo, Crepper! I was about to make an original chapter about Y/n and Masami dating, but I can't seem to find the plot. Maybe you could come up with one.

Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 We could still become friends, like, friends.
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AlexDirector1

Darwin wasn't dating Carrie before Season 5.
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Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 The chapter begins at school. Even though you and Masami are girlfriends, they still blush, and he asks you out on a date. Masami covers her face with a book and says she forgets they're dating, but she still likes this dynamic. On the way, you say, "This is the best day of my life! What could possibly go wrong?" Granny Yoyo is visiting, and Gumball is with Penny, Darwin is with Carrie playing a video game, and Anais is with Mom and Dad, so he's going to bingo with her. He tries to explain, but Granny comes up with the "poor little grandma, nobody likes her" line and asks him to please go with her. You plan to be with both of them at the same time.
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AlexDirector1

I was going to make the original car chapter, but I can't find your plot anywhere.

Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 And the police stop chasing them, but the car is a little damaged, and to help the boys, they push the car home until Mom, super furious, makes the situation worse. The police arrive, and he and the boys and their friends are surrounded by helicopters while Nicole screams at them. End of chapter
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Crepper201567

@AlexDirector1 Everything was going well on the road until Gumball noticed and everyone ducked except for you. Mom's car came along and you and Mom looked at each other as the car passed you at the same time on the road. To make matters worse, they ran a red light. At first, a police officer and a cameraman saw the car and gave chase. It turned into a police chase with a helicopter. The car went through in pieces until there was a ravine, which they went over and flew across, GTA 5 style.
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