CrimsonTypist

I just finished my newest story, and the first one that I've worked on in years. It's called Ego and I'd really appreciate it if some people would give it a read and give me some feedback. I already have the second chapter and part of the third typed up, but I still have to look over it again before I publish them. I'd really like some feedback and criticism on the first chapter before I do though.

CrimsonTypist

I just finished my newest story, and the first one that I've worked on in years. It's called Ego and I'd really appreciate it if some people would give it a read and give me some feedback. I already have the second chapter and part of the third typed up, but I still have to look over it again before I publish them. I'd really like some feedback and criticism on the first chapter before I do though.

nish97_

Hello!
          Just popped by to say thankyou so much for fanning me!
          It genuinely means the world to me and I can't even express how thankful I am :)
          If you've voted, commented or even read any of my stories thankyou again!
          If you haven't it would mean the world to me if you could check one of them out when you have the time :)
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          If you want me to read your story send me a private message, don't post it on my profile!
          Hope you have a good week!
          
          Much Love SecretCrush2k12 :) xxx

Dalilah_Rose

hey you! thank you so much for fanning...you seem nice so chat with me sometime...that sounded like a slut...lmao! um..well, computers are great haha...try building one its reallly hard! D: i like robotics...its cool. Um...well, um...Helllo, and good Bye! :) talk to you laterzzz!