Jackson Miele

My Story Has been posted, if you read it, can yall give me any recommendations on how to make the sequel better?

It's a simple question, do you think that I should work more on my writing and fixing plotholes?

If yall  want a q&a, I would be more than happy to do it, go ahead which whatever questions you may have ( must not be homophobic or anythings deems horrible)