Its a great start. I like the way in the first chapters you gave us a little insight on what to expect more from the story which will leave readers saying how is she in the mutant world? how is she so powerful? how will she team up with the others? so you really started out great because you really grabbed my attention and left me wanting more. Just remember not to rush the story. because your chapters are too good.
I don't mind i'm 15, in november i will be 16 but everyone says that i look younger!!! By the way i loved the new chapter and you were so sweet in the dedication!!! I hope you will write more soon
@NiqueGiovanni yes, i am but i'm afraid that i'm not good and nobody will read it! I never realise that i could ship Catwoman and Captain America but you shaw me that i was wrong and now I ship them so hard it hurts in my heart! I hope she chooses Cap over Batman. I'm really excited for the next chapter :)
Is it going to be a fan fiction or an original story idea? Don't worry I'm sure it will get reads! Well definitely a read from me! Lol I never thought I would do a story about them but I was thinking hmm, maybe I should do a couple no one would think of including myself. Plus their like yin and yang so i thought it would be cute, But awwww thank you! #CatandCap. And I'm going to tryy and upload as soon as possible!
@CristinaAmaralGomes awwwwwww thankkkkk youuuuu. Made my day yet again. I was actually almost giving up on the story till I saw your votes. But really thank youu. I hope you put up a story so I can say even better things to you. Are you planning to write a story?.
@NiqueGiovanni awww!!! You're welcome and thank you! I love your story and i'm looking forward for the next chapter! You're a very talented writer! Keep going :)
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