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@StalkerLyfe PLZZZZ DONT MURDER ME
I WAS IGNORING MY COMMENTS AND I DIDNT SEE U TEXTED ME AND IM A ASSHOLE I KNOW
FORGIVE ME PLEASE
ok so the story is maaaad good
Especially for ur first
I like that u separate the POVs, like telling us who’s talking, it makes it easy to understand
I see nothing wrong with the story tbh
But the haunted house thing
USE THAT PLEASE
I WANNA SEE SCARED (PRINCESS) KEITH RUNNING INTO (PRINCE) LANCE’S ARMS
That’s all I gotta say
Please forgive my asshole self