Ok change of plans guys, I'm working my but off remaking the book. I know your going to love it, because I'm a bit of a perfectionist, and was very hard on my self with creative criticism while making it. anyways, I'm putting a lot more thought into it, and it's going to be a while before it releases. It's going to take time, because things don't just poof into existence, if the world worked like that it'd be a strange place.
I'm have a plot going I'm making ideas and more keep coming as I go along making the story better so it keeps changing for the better eventually I know I'll have to decide but with a Brian like mines it's hard to just have one great idea.
anyways before, I could not decide on perspective narrative, so the story was a bit bland. Because I mean, the way you narrate has everything to do with how it comes across to your readers. if there is no connection, and the deliverance is messy, then there is no communication, no vibe, no zing, no understanding is happening.
The reader does not, get what your doing. so, I'm taking most of my time on this one thing. But that now I know more of What I'm going for we can all be peachy.
And what I'm going for, is me telling A story to you but you still feel like your there, you know apart of it or feel as tho your the character.
so more of in the past continuous tense and in future continuous but the perspective narrative will change in some aspects of the story like sometimes I'll just be telling a story are it will literally be like your the character not like your just standing by watching or even if you are you'll still feel like your apart of it but mostly you'll be the character from Time to time so second hand embarrassment is definitely going to happen☺
Anyways that's the update, stay critical love you guys.
