CriticallyThinking

I definitely need help to see if I'm going in the right direction with this new short story I'm writing? Any pointers. Thank you xoxo:)

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Thanks for the follow. It always means a lot. Have a fab weekend! 

All of you writers out there should help each other out. Getting your book out there is hard and if you are anything like me clicking that vote button can be a tiresome thing when you're feeling lazy.  But we can't all change the world but we can make someone's day by just clicking that vote button and giving them hope for the future. We are one. So vote for someone's book today and comment #Vote2Day. Please post this on your page.  Change Wattpad forever. 
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Hey~ thanks for the follow back! Feel free to check out my book "Our story." Lol... Thank you again!