DarrieTheCriticChic

Hey, if you are on I would love it if you could have a look at my story. I have only just started it but I would like to see if you think the opening is good or not. 

Alrighty, I regret ot inform most of you peeople wanting a review, but this account was hacked--I don't even know how-- but my password was changed, and I couldn't acess it.
          
          How I know this?
          
          When I checked my email for this account, it was "PoopyFaceTomatoNose123" Whatever that is/ Of course I laughed, by why would someone hack this account just to change the password o.o So anyway, this account will be back in business soon!

Please critique my work, I'd like to see how I am doing.
          http://w.tt/1DM0LAV

Could you critique my story All Things Illegal?
          
          I'd really like some feedback.
          
          Thank you.

Could you critique my work SEEKING SERENITY, http://www.wattpad.com/story/24469551-seeking-serenity

So to announce, I will return back onto this account at 12:00 pm easten time, or 1 hour and 22 minutes from now.

I apologize for my absence everybody, I had a lot of stuff happening, so I was unable to enter wattpad at all.
          
          Now, because I am happy with the Applications, I will accept all of you:
          
          @SeanKang
          @ElaineKane
          @Chloe_Darrah
          
          You are all accepted into this crew, and at the earliest you can, private message me,  and I will ask a few questions.
          
          I know I only said two other people, but heck-why not three?

||| Crew Application |||
          
          Name: ElaineKane
          
          Age: im sorry, I can't give out personal info...
          
          Why: Because I like reading, and I like helping other people to get better, and also because trying to find bad things about a book can sometimes be fun. (not to be mean!)
          
          Possible books: I don't really care, but i WILL NOT do 1D fanfics, because I know nothing about 1D and too many of them are exactly the same with just dif characters.
          
          How much I like reading: 9,000,000,000,000/100

Excuse me, DarrieTheCritic, I have a question.
          Do the stories/books have to be... actuall BOOK books, or can they be about ranting, raving, ect.?
          
          I apologize for the inconveinience
          
          ~Red_Hammer (Trayson)

@CriticismCrew I accept your offer to join.