DJRemix13
Hey! I noticed that you were a critique and I'd love it if you critiqued my book The Forgotten Island Book I. Please let me know what you think of it if you decide to check it out. If you could comment your critiques on each chapter, that'd be great and would really help me pinpoint any problem areas. If you can't or would rather my critique my book, I won't mind and I understand. Have an awesome day!