MarieLotte's Twin

Please may I have a critique on my story Revolution? Thank you!

@southernblondie1997 Haha yeah!

@CritiqueLotte Haha!:) That's cool:)

Yes. XDD  

OMG! =D Lol! You're July 28! @ThatLadyinGreen 

Wait, wait I just stalked your profile a bit and saw your birthday is on July 28th! :'3 Omg. We have the same birthdate XDDD

Yup! Haha :) She's the writing one, I'm the critiquing one. Haha =D

Thank you for the follow!!:) Hmm... are you in any relation to MarieLotte? :P

When the opening hooks you in, it means the book has potential.