CrowWhite

@NickiWest why, you're very welcome :) I look forward to reading your stories some more :D

CrowWhite

@tortorlove woo! at least someone! I read a bit and its a very good idea, very straight forward, but if you wanted, you might want to add a bit of 'back-thought' to the main character. So she listens to the voice BUT- she doesn't trust the man-she hesitates and turns up late....food for thought! Keep writing! :)