Crowoftheeast

Chapter 6! It's a rough post but I wanted to get it out there while I could. 
          	Work is still busy working 12 hours shifts 4 days a week so who knows when the next time I will get to sit and brain blast!

Crowoftheeast

Woohoo! Finally got Chapter 5 rewritten and posted! Work is still heavy but I've slowly been writing whenever I have a chance. 
          
          As always, feed back is wanted so I can improve my skills and hopefully make my story more appealing to read! Thank you!

Crowoftheeast

@brooke-h-writing  thanks! I literally had to sit down for 5 hoirs and drill my brain for motivation. It helps I already have the basic layout for each chapter done.. its just the writing in detail that kills me. 
            
            Thanks again for all the help towards the chapters too! I really appreciate it!
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nevaeh_charleston

You are doing a GREAT job!! I don’t even have much going on and I’m not writing… very impressive that you’ve been able to write this much while still working!!!
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Crowoftheeast

Currently rewriting Chapter 5. I didn't like the direction I took and was having a hard time writing for Chapter 6 with it. I've still got a bit of writers block but will slowly hack away at it over the next few days! 
          
          Work has finally slowed down for me, I am hoping to get back to posting a chapter every Wednesday if possible!

Crowoftheeast

Working ridiculous hours this month. Posting will be slow. I'm focusing what energy I have into editting chapter 4 for now... though that process is slow as well

nevaeh_charleston

@Crowoftheeast here’s what Chap GPT wrote as a definition of a writing sprint for me cuz I’m too lazy: A writing sprint is a focused and intense period of time during which a writer dedicates themselves to writing without any distractions. It involves setting a specific goal or word count and working diligently to achieve it within a predetermined time frame, typically ranging from 15 minutes to an hour.
            
            During a writing sprint, the writer aims to generate a significant amount of content without worrying about grammar, sentence structure, or editing. The primary objective is to get ideas flowing and put words on paper. The emphasis is on quantity rather than quality at this stage.
            
            Writing sprints can be done individually or as part of a group activity, such as a writing workshop or virtual writing session. They are often used to overcome writer's block, increase productivity, and foster creativity. By setting aside dedicated time and eliminating distractions, writers can tap into a state of flow and achieve a substantial output within a short period.
            
            After the sprint is completed, the writer can review and revise the work, polishing it to meet their desired standards. Writing sprints can be an effective technique for overcoming procrastination and generating momentum in the writing process.
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nevaeh_charleston

@Crowoftheeast There was this man named Jesus. He lived about 2,000 years ago, but is still here to guide you and I. His time here on earth was nothing but a blessing. He came into our world as nothing but a meek baby boy even though he was a prince. Jesus is God's son. He had it all in heaven. It was perfect! But his children, (us,) were headed for death. Jesus gave up his omnipresence, his perfect world, and eventually his perfect being to save us. He was accused of blasphemy for claiming that he was God's son and was crucified on a roman cross even though he was completely innocent. He could have called on our father, God, to save him, but he didn't. Instead, he took our sin upon his own being and gave us the gift of eternal life with him in heaven if we choose to trust him and believe that he died for us. Three days after his crucifixion, God raised him from the dead, showing that sin may have won a battle, but ultimately, sin had/has no chance. Jesus is the reason that we are all here. It wasn't just a coincidence that people were here. We didn't evolve from any sort of monkey over millions of years, but instead were designed after our loving father. God is perfect, he does not do wrong, he judges fairly, and he loved unconditionally. I hope that you will truly think about this. Maybe you will get a Bible of your own and search for what is truth yourself!
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nevaeh_charleston

@Crowoftheeast would you like me to tell you about my savior?
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Crowoftheeast

First chapter is out! 
          I've been working on this story for over 5 years and finally feel it's where I want it to be! 
          
          I would love feedback, suggestions to improve the story further, and of course likes/favorites to help promote my story for others to find it.